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oh dang...cut straight to the heart on this one...the smacking..bruising...tears....
Oh wow... Yes I agree with Brian. Straight to the heart with a wham! Hope this is what used to be and isn't what is now!
It touches the core...a song, this is?
on gosh...a tough read. Straight to the heart....awful..
This one just hurts, starts to make my stomach turn in an instant. Powerful read.Gene
such a bite...powerfully expressed! ~ Rose
That stung!! Terrific writing! But I bet you are waaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy stronger than your dolly...
wow that one hit the heart a battered child who knows nothing but to batter her only doll that she has to comfort her so sadhttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/04/memories/
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OMG.... you might have just smacked me in the head with a frying pan and I wouldn't have know it.... the emotions from this just immediately poured out from me.... intense, intense..... very worthy topic..... very smacking, very much alive... very worthy topic......
my mind suddenly went to a grinding halt for a few moments after reading this. please check my entry too: http://wp.me/TDjw
SON OF A... this is one of the most powerful things I have seen in a long time. It's like being slapped in the face by reality. Stunning write! Wow!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/
your words make very powerful impacts here.moving piece.
Poignant! You hit this one right on the -- well, maybe I shouldn't put it THAT way!Hope this helps to raise awareness.
Touching and powerful poem.Here is my entry:http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.html
oh, that hurts...so sadhttp://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/triolet-vi/
Very moving and tense! At first the words seem so childishly sweet but at the end they turn out to be the words of a child unfairly bruised by traumatic experiences. Painful...
This is thought provoking, awakening and probably happens more than it ever should. Thanks for sharing.
short & to the punch, this poem.it evokes disturbance & sorrow ..and, this is what the poem is supposed to do...'move' the reader into thinking or feeling. your poem does this.I like your poem, sadly though.thanks for sharing.tinkwelborn http://wp.me/p102ON-4X
wow direct and powerful, well done x
This is heart-wrenching. You pack so much into this brief poem. So well written. Victoria
Gave me chills. This poem should be made into a poster. I am serious!
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