tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post9191854961425168731..comments2023-08-29T05:26:34.790+01:00Comments on Poetic Causes: My DollyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-7747006198175208862012-01-12T09:20:25.023+00:002012-01-12T09:20:25.023+00:00Gave me chills. This poem should be made into a po...Gave me chills. This poem should be made into a poster. I am serious!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-59928367526434656242011-10-15T19:47:20.021+01:002011-10-15T19:47:20.021+01:00This is heart-wrenching. You pack so much into thi...This is heart-wrenching. You pack so much into this brief poem. So well written. VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-75218250268728134872011-10-14T17:49:06.028+01:002011-10-14T17:49:06.028+01:00wow direct and powerful, well done xwow direct and powerful, well done xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05004133697092560471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-68637244501911127662011-10-13T13:40:35.451+01:002011-10-13T13:40:35.451+01:00short & to the punch, this poem.
it evokes dis...short & to the punch, this poem.<br />it evokes disturbance & sorrow ..and, this is what the poem is supposed to do...'move' the reader into thinking or feeling. your poem does this.<br />I like your poem, sadly though.<br />thanks for sharing.<br /><br />tinkwelborn http://wp.me/p102ON-4Xtinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-1773922100158465722011-10-12T17:42:04.407+01:002011-10-12T17:42:04.407+01:00This is thought provoking, awakening and probably ...This is thought provoking, awakening and probably happens more than it ever should. Thanks for sharing.Gwen Dubeauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-12591485500285082132011-10-09T16:31:13.380+01:002011-10-09T16:31:13.380+01:00Very moving and tense! At first the words seem so ...Very moving and tense! At first the words seem so childishly sweet but at the end they turn out to be the words of a child unfairly bruised by traumatic experiences. Painful...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-71629337232946982972011-10-09T05:02:16.561+01:002011-10-09T05:02:16.561+01:00Potent work!Potent work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-47129905042931025602011-10-09T01:59:59.492+01:002011-10-09T01:59:59.492+01:00oh, that hurts...so sad
http://zongrik.wordpress....oh, that hurts...so sad<br /><br />http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/triolet-vi/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-57321957179829548672011-10-07T15:03:07.796+01:002011-10-07T15:03:07.796+01:00Touching and powerful poem.
Here is my entry:
htt...Touching and powerful poem.<br /><br />Here is my entry:<br />http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.htmlJack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-23041916854069655922011-10-07T01:40:16.928+01:002011-10-07T01:40:16.928+01:00Poignant! You hit this one right on the -- well, m...Poignant! You hit this one right on the -- well, maybe I shouldn't put it THAT way!<br /><br />Hope this helps to raise awareness.Charles Elliott/Beautyseerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05779529545987700565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-24484312958282351742011-10-06T17:30:53.063+01:002011-10-06T17:30:53.063+01:00your words make very powerful impacts here.
moving...your words make very powerful impacts here.<br />moving piece.The Orange Treehttp://cooloceanwaves.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-59487724674843295162011-10-06T15:55:24.863+01:002011-10-06T15:55:24.863+01:00sad.
well put.sad.<br />well put.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-7797197192680561192011-10-06T12:59:13.850+01:002011-10-06T12:59:13.850+01:00SON OF A... this is one of the most powerful thing...SON OF A... this is one of the most powerful things I have seen in a long time. It's like being slapped in the face by reality. Stunning write! Wow!<br /><br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-87548702102943107092011-10-06T12:36:37.192+01:002011-10-06T12:36:37.192+01:00my mind suddenly went to a grinding halt for a few...my mind suddenly went to a grinding halt for a few moments after reading this. please check my entry too: <a href="http://wp.me/TDjw" rel="nofollow">http://wp.me/TDjw</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-22369849895809724862011-10-06T03:46:02.966+01:002011-10-06T03:46:02.966+01:00OMG.... you might have just smacked me in the head...OMG.... you might have just smacked me in the head with a frying pan and I wouldn't have know it.... the emotions from this just immediately poured out from me.... intense, intense..... very worthy topic..... very smacking, very much alive... very worthy topic......Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-39252497227430024822011-10-06T03:01:00.091+01:002011-10-06T03:01:00.091+01:00I have nominated you for the Versatile Bloggers Aw...I have nominated you for the Versatile Bloggers Award. Your site always inspires me in poetry and I believe you deserve this recognition. Please claim your award and follow the three requirements for this award. It is my honor to nominate you for this award. Thank you.<br /><br />http://wp.me/p1lGBx-qOAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-64833118817680685312011-10-06T02:39:48.765+01:002011-10-06T02:39:48.765+01:00wow that one hit the heart a battered child who kn...wow that one hit the heart a battered child who knows nothing but to batter her only doll that she has to comfort her so sad<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/04/memories/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-29344387061965452482011-10-05T19:26:20.043+01:002011-10-05T19:26:20.043+01:00That stung!! Terrific writing!
But I bet you are ...That stung!! Terrific writing! <br />But I bet you are waaaaaaaaaaaaaayyy stronger than your dolly...Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-15111330429124511002011-10-05T14:51:21.378+01:002011-10-05T14:51:21.378+01:00such a bite...powerfully expressed! ~ Rosesuch a bite...powerfully expressed! ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-45425077331609370182011-10-05T13:51:46.370+01:002011-10-05T13:51:46.370+01:00This one just hurts, starts to make my stomach tur...This one just hurts, starts to make my stomach turn in an instant. Powerful read.<br />GeneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-38062309962453879212011-10-05T11:24:35.666+01:002011-10-05T11:24:35.666+01:00on gosh...a tough read. Straight to the heart....a...on gosh...a tough read. Straight to the heart....awful..Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-84255498137421206032011-10-05T06:44:42.976+01:002011-10-05T06:44:42.976+01:00It touches the core...
a song, this is?It touches the core...<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/10/wings-of-fire.html" rel="nofollow">a song, this is?</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-89214722002250589962011-10-04T23:26:18.538+01:002011-10-04T23:26:18.538+01:00Oh wow... Yes I agree with Brian. Straight to the ...Oh wow... Yes I agree with Brian. Straight to the heart with a wham! <br />Hope this is what used to be and isn't what is now!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1108761635422467837.post-82799697181996424772011-10-04T21:27:24.845+01:002011-10-04T21:27:24.845+01:00oh dang...cut straight to the heart on this one......oh dang...cut straight to the heart on this one...the smacking..bruising...tears....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com